CF : what was the uh oh for ?
Love the suspense in the chapter .I wonder
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you’ll see . but not today , i have
a concert (nothing big ! just a schoool , it’s not like i’m famous lol ) .
NOTE : THIS IS NOT THE MAIN
CONFLICT . THIS JUST LEADS UP TO A PART THAT LEADS TO THE CONFLICT ( CONFUZZLING , ISN’T IT )
bad Mia and Tia!
Oh man, way to be Sally! I cant wait to see how this is
gonna go…
Chapter 8 - Trouble on Route 66 Part
II
Setting/Mood: A few minutes after Sally accidentally blurted that she was McQueen’s girlfriend to Mia
and Tia , she was freaking out . Not the small freaking out , I mean the [b]practically shaking , word
stuttering freaking out [/b] . Who could blame her ? The reason she was in Radiator Springs was beause
she left the fast lane . If this got out , she’d be over the spped limit in the fast lane . She imagined the
front page articles , blindness from cameras , and the girls that would envy her , and it wasn’t very pretty
.
Angie tried to console her , telling her it would never happen with Lightning around , but Sally
didn’t buy it . She knew Lightning well enough by now . If the press found out , he would break up with her .
Not because he didn’t like her , but because he had that small need to protect her . She liked that in him , but
now it wasn’t sounding so good . Finally , Angie gave up and decided to do something a little more drastic .
Angie : That’s it ! I’m taking this into my own tires ! I promise you Sally , they will
not get away with this .
Sally : (motherly-tone) Angie , what are you
planning to do ?
Angie : ( ) Oh , nothing . Just gonna fight fire with fire .
S/M: It was nighttime now . The stars were out , and everyone was in their garage getting
ready for bed . Well , almost everyone .
The twins each lived in their own cone , but unlike Lightning
and angie , they were paying rent . They were planning to change that though , with their brand new info on the
next celebrity couple . What they didn’t know was that Angie , equipped with a camera on that stand thingy the
poparazzi have , was right behind their windows . Angie peeked in Mia’s window , and was shocked by what she saw
. Hidden from most peoples view , was a Chick Hicks poster . Angie quickly took a picture and Mia turned and saw
her .
Mia : OMG what are doing ?!
Angie : getting the hottest scoop in Chick’s secret fan . Nobody
doesn’t know about this huh ? ( Mia shook her head ) ( Anige gasped ) Not even your sister ? She sure would be
ashamed if she saw this .
Mia : She’d kill me for sure .
Angie : Well then , why don’t we keep
this our little secret . That is , unless you tell everyone Sally’s little secret . Then your’s just might
slip out .
Mia : (gasped ) You wouldn’t !
Angie : Oh I would . So ,
do we got ourselves a deal ?
Mia hesitated , but then agreed . She knew that if she couldn’t tell , Tia
always could .
Angie : I’ll just keep this picture for now . I might need it . Well , good night !
Angie left , and when Mia left , she smirked with satisfaction .
Angie : 1 down , 1 to go .
S/M : She crept towards Tia’s cone now , and was suprised with what she saw . There was Tia , with a
Chick plushie by her side .
Tia : ( to plushie ) Oh , I love you Chick , I always will ! And if I have to
keep it a secret I will ! Mia can keep lightning , i’d rather have you any day !
Tia gave the plushie a
big smooch , and Angie gave a small giggle while she took this picture .
Tia : (gasps) Who’s there
?
Angie : Oh , just me , with some new onfo thanks to you . So you really like Chick . That’s a shame .
When Lightning finds out he’ll be so upset he’s lost another fan and Mia , i’m afraid to know what Mia might
do .
Tia : ( begging ) Oh please don’t tell her !
Angie : I won’t , as long as you don’t tell
anybody about the newest celebrity .
Tia : I promise .
Angie : Good . I just keep this . it might
come in handy . Oh , and I suggest you don’t talk to your stuffed cars tooo loud . It could blow you cover .
S/M : The next morning , Angie told Sally word by word what happen . Sally was relieved ,
and went on to normal life . The twins , well , they made sure not to say a word , especially when Angie was
around .
There’s a little more to this chapter , i’ll post the rest
soon . Lennonluvr9’s prediction might start .
As long as Lightning doesnt find out and break
up with Sally! That would be horrible! ooooo, blackmail! How fun. And Tia has a Chick plushie? Lol, wow.
No , he doesn’t find out .
I can’t wait to see what happends next.
o.k Chapter 8 is done ! What I was going to put in there
i now think will be better in it’s own chapter .
Chapter 9 : Ch-Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes (sorry i had to do
that !)
S/M : Angie has now gotten much more used to her new lifestyle . She liked feeling independent and
having alot of friends . Usualy when she had friends , they would only be her friends for her father , not
herself in general .
Another reason why she liked her life was she was practicaly a superstar ! Every
girl envied her ( especially the twins since Angie hung out with Lightning alot ) and she had her bobble-body .
You are officialy famous when you have your own bobble-body . ( note from typer : )
There were
some bad things though , and one was the poparazzi . By the time a race was over , Angie was blinded by the
camaras , she cold hear their questions :
" Angie , how do you think you did today ? "
"
Is it true you have a part-time job as a dishwasher ? "
"Do you think you’ll be as good as father
?"
That was another thing , being compared to her father . It annoyed her so much ! Just because
she’s his daughter doesn’t mean she’s perfect at racing . For all they know , some racing techniques could be
her achilles heal .
There was one more thing she didn’t like , and that was how much the racers flirted
with her . One time she saw Jeff gordon smile and wink at her .
" eww!" , she thought to
herself .
There was one car that hadn’t flirted with her ( remember lightning did on the first race ) ,
and that was Bolts . He said good luck to her a few times , and they had some ineresting conversations , mostly
about the lastes rock bands and all that teenager jazz , but that was it . No wink . No whistes . No " hey
baby , how’s it going " . No staring at her bumper while he was behind her , which was most of the time if
she wasn’t getting first place .
Scaringly , that made her attracted to him .
"I can’t
like him , he’s like , my friend . He’s supposed to be my enemy ! I mean , he works with Chick . If Lightning
found out , he’d freak "
But then the other side of her mind said . " Forget Lightning . Forget
Chick . If you like Bolts , then you like Bolts ! Just go and ask him out already !!! "
She was too
confuzzled .
Well , anyway , we’ll come back to that later .
Doc , noticed something
around his office . Well , not something , someone . Most ( ok all ) of the times ,
it was tiny blue-green eyes watching him work . He knew it must be something about this job she enjoyed watching
, but he didn’t know what .
One day , he caught those eyes , and their owner , looking in his window to
see if he was there .
Doc : (sigh , when he does this Angie jumps and turns around ) Ok Angie , what
interests you so much in me fixing up cars . Is it the grossness ?
Angie : No
Doc : The drama
?
Angie : No , it’s not that dramatic .
Doc : The -
Angie : No! It’s just , it interests
me , you know , as a future career .
Doc: Don’t you already have a career ?
Angie : So , you have
three . And racing isn’t really a career ?
Doc ; And why wouldn’t you call it a career ?
Angie :
Well , first , all i’m goin’ around in circles . And second … I’m not really doing it for the career . It’s
for college .
Doc : Since when have you ever wanted to go to college .
Angie : Since I found out
my dad didn’t . He graduated high school and was wooshed away to be the best racecar in the world . I’m nothing
like my dad . the only thing we have in common is genetics . That’s It . What I really want to do is get away
from the cameras and do something realistic , like being a doctor or a nurse , or something more helpful to
people . All I’m doing at the moment is giving cars another chance to be a lazy bum .
Doc : Hm , nice
speech
Angie : Thank You .
Doc : And since it was such a good speech , how about i let you see what
it’s like , before you spend a lot of money just to go do something you don’t like .
Angie : heh heh ,
too late .
Doc : Ha Ha , so what do you say .
Angie : Sure thing !
O.k now to where I
left off before . Like I said , Angie like Bolts , an yet she didn’t . She had no idea what side to go on .
And then It happened .
Setting : At racetrack . right behind LeakLess’ little place ( this has
no reason to story whatsoever ) .
Bolts : Hey Angie !
Angie: Oh , hi Bolts !
Bolts : I
was thinking , maybe … you know … we could go to a movie … or go get some lunch … you know just hang out
?
Angie : You mean … like a date ?
Bolts: Yeah … kind of .
Angie : ( thinking ) OMG !!
He likes me ! He really likes me ! (squels in head)
Angie now speaking calm and collected ) Sure ,
that’s cool .
Bolts : So i’ll see you -
Angie : Saturday at 8:00 . I know our next race is right
next to a movie theater .
Bolts : That’s cool . See ya .
Angie : See ya .
( Bolts drives
away )
Angie : Squeee !! <3
It was the next
Saturday night , around ten thirty . Angie was In her trailer , thinking about what happened on their date
Angie : ( thinking of course , she doesn’t talk to herself , not that that’s a bad thing . ) That was
best night of my life ! A scary movie , with popcorn and flo’s feul , courtesy of me , of course , and a few
really scary parts forcing me to jump and grab his tire . (sigh) I can’t wait until next week . I hope nobody
noticed me coming back so late .
Setting : Bolts in his trailer
Bolts : I can’t believe Chick is
making me lie to her just so he can win that stupid piston cup again . I wish I didn’t have to do this .
I sence trouble bum! Bum! BUM!
Hey, keep up the good work. This is
really good.
Gasp! What a turn of
events!
I told you there was trouble
. Oh , and I forgot to mention :
[b]The King still thinks she wants to be a racecar ( as a
career , i mean , she’s already a racecar , but u know what i mean ) [/b]
I think
someones gonna get hurt.
Mentally or Physically
?
Chapter 10 (already ? wow this is going by fast ) - Ideas
S/M: Things were going well in Radiator
Springs , ecspecially Angie’s “lessons” , we shall call them . She was a pretty fast learner , and
already knew the parts of a common car ( fine male & female if you really want me say that ) . Racing was
going well too , Lightning and Angie were still at the top in Points , followed by (of course) Chick and Bolts .
That was going fine too , you know , Angie & Bolts . Angie was blinded by teenage love , and didn’t
even notice Bolts didn’t really love her ( well as a couple , he would rather have her as a friend , but he knew
that path was already gone ) . He knew he was going to be hated by her in the end , but if that was the cost of
paying the bills for his family , then he would do it . You see , his father couldn’t work because he needed an
engine transplant and his mother has to take care of him . Since he was the only one out of his 3 siblings , he
had to get all the money so they wouldn’t be kicked to the street . If it wasn’t for Chick , he would be at
some homeless garage or worse , out in the cold rain . Si he had to do this or he and his family would be
garageless .
For some reason , Angie was a little more close to Doc than to the others at radiator
Springs . He was like another father to her , but older , and a little more understanding than The King . It was
kind of weird , let good at the same time .
The while Radiator Springs crew was at the track , the 50th
lap in the race , and it started to rain , Lightning got quickly to his pit , and Guido put on his rain cover .
For Angie it took a little more time , and she was sliding around a bit .
Doc : ( concerned a bit ) Angie
, hit the brakes !
Angie : Kind of hard it’s rainin’ cats and dogs !
Finally , Angue stopped ,
and reversed cautiously , making sure she didn’t slip .
Doc : What was with that ?
Angie : Well ,
when your a dangerously fast racecar , it’s hard to stop when the roads so slick . I would think you’d know
that ?
Doc : Angie , there’s hardly any rain on the track .
Angie : It’s my brakes , since
they’re so used to not stopping , and there not really supposed to , since that’s the kind of car I am ,
they’re not used to stopping in the rain .
Doc : Hmm , I sould’ve known that .
Anouncer :
[i]The race has been postponed to tomorrow , ofr the countinous rain that is supposed to come
.[/i]
Sally : I’m guessing our date has been postponed to Monday too ?
Lightning : Yep
, can’t take any chances , the poparazzi may neverbe a Radiator Springs , but they’re everywhere else , the
little oil thirsty parasites .
Sally : ( small laugh ) I can wait .
Chick : ( who was
listening in on Angie & Doc’s conversation NOT L&S’s . )
So , she’s not good in the rain .
Bolts!
Bolts : Yes sir ?
Chick : I’ve got an idea for gettin g rid of Angie , maybe even Lightning
too , but Angie’s gonna have to trust you a little more . Plan on your Saturdays being booked for about a few
months .
Bolts : What’s the plan ?
Chick whispers to Bolts . Then he drives away , leaving Bolts
to himself .
Bolts : (gasps) Oh , no .
Sorry for the short chapter , I
just have to put this in so you guys will know how CHick got his idea , and some other stuff too .
peoples
, just lke TSS , i don’t start a new chapter until somebody replys . Once in a while I will , but only if i’m
bored . And with new presents from the holiday , I doubt that will happen any time soon .
I
suggest you all remember this .
Wow, now we have evil plots! Doc
had better do something to help Angie with that weakness of hers…
Well, I see
that we have something in common. So, here is yours. Nice work! Keep going! Can’t wait for more!