Awesome! Canāt wait for it.
Sounds great! Iāll definitely give it a read when itās posted.
Well guys, here it is: Chapter 5! Just to let you know, things are about to get a little dark. Youāll find out what I mean when you get to the end of this chapter.
Chapter 5: The Right To Bear Arms
That day at Sunnyside, nothing really happened. That night, howeverā¦
Buzz: Bookworm, we havenāt seen Lotso all day. Where is he?
Woody: Thatās what I want to know!
Bookworm: I donāt know! I sent Stretch out on patrol duty about 30 minutes ago, and she hasnāt come back yet. Besidesā¦
(Right at that moment, they see Stretch sliding rapidly across the floor toward them, covered in dirt, and scratches all-throughout)
Bookworm: Stretch! What happened to you?
Stretch: Itā¦ It was Lā¦ Lotso!
Woody: Lotso did this? How?
Stretch: Well, I was just doing my patrol duties like Bookworm told me, and the next thing I know, heās right behind me! He picked me, started banging me against the wall, then he took me outside and shoved me into a wet mud puddle, and then he threw me back inside.
Buzz: So where is he now?
Stretch: Iā¦ I donāt know. Maybe the Butterfly Room.
Buzz: Thatās all I needed to know.
(Buzz starts walking away, and Woody calls out to him)
Woody: Buzz! Where are you going?
Buzz: To give Lotso a piece of my mind! Iām gonna let him know that he canāt just keep hurting innocent toys. Itās us he wants Woody, and Iām not gonna let him get away with whatever heās planning. Now, how do I
get into the Butterfly Room?
(Woody, Bookworm, and Stretch just stare at Buzz dumbfounded)
Bookworm: Umā¦ you couldā¦ use the zip-line.
Buzz: Perfect!
(Buzz jumps onto a stack of toys and onto the zip-line, which is facing the door to the Butterfly Room)
Woody: Buzz, be careful.
Buzz: Donāt worry, I will be. To infinity and beyond!
(Buzz steps off of the stack of toys and soars through the top of the door into the Caterpillar Room)
Buzz: Alright, Lotso! Where are you?!?
(Buzz hears footsteps behind him, and then sees a big bear-like shadow)
Lotso: Iām right here, Lightyear.
Buzz: Lotso! You have to stop what youāre doing! You are putting the lives of other toys in danger!
(Lotso kicks Buzz onto a stack of old newspapers, and hits him with his cane)
Lotso: Since when have I ever listened to reason? Besidesā¦ Youāre all washed up!
(Lotso takes out a water gun and shoots Buzz with it)
Buzz: NNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!
Great job with this chapter! I am excited to see what happens next. Great cliff hanger.
Great chapter! I canāt wait to see how Buzz gets out of this.
Good chapter but whats so bad about a water gun?
It might be able to ruin his circuits or something, I suppose.
BINGO.
Chapter 6 on Tuesday, and then chapter 7 on my 15th birthday (November 19th).
Okay Iām looking forwart to it. And also great signature.
Okay Iām looking forwart to it. And also great signature.
Thanks!
Your welcome.
Hey guys, sorry about the delays. Lotsoās Revenge will return sometime over Thanksgiving break. Expect at least one new chapter.
Thatās alright. Iāll read it when itās up.
Well, I canāt believe that Iām saying this, but as much as it pains me to do this, Iām gonna have to put the story on temporary hiatus. The thing is, Iām having a bad case of writerās block. I have literally just sat at the computer for hours trying to come up with something, but I just canāt. I know I said before that I never plan anything, and that I always just come up with something as I go along, but thatās the problem. I never plan anything, Iām an wing it kind of guy, and sometimes I come up with something really great and thenā¦ Nothing. I canāt possibly think of how to continue. Thatās exactly what happened with the last chapter. That last part somehow made it to where I canāt think of how to continue the story. So, sorry guys, but you wonāt seeing anymore of Lotsoās Revenge for an while, unless I somehow come up with something out of nowhere.
Thatās understandable. If you ever do update it, Iāll read it, but I understand.
This is a great story so far.
Lotso is one EVIL bear thoughā¦
Good news everyone!
Lotsoās Revenge will return sometime in the next month or so!
Thatās great! Iāll be looking forward to read it.
Hey guys, so itās been way over a year since the last chapter, and I have some good newsā¦
The next chapter will be posted sometime this summer! I know, itās a long way away. But trust me, itāll be worth it.