[size=92]So I’m
writing a story about Ramone’s past, cuz he’s cool like that. 
I’ll put links to the chapters
here in the first post of this topic. All my literature is on DeviantArt. The story begins when Ramone is ten
years old. WARNING: If you don’t like to read about death in stories, then don’t read the prologue. ^_^; Just a
small notice for our younger viewers. Oh yeah, and there’s a bit of bad language too, so watch
out.
Index
[url=http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47782095/]Prologue[/ur
l]
[url=http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47882749/]Chapter
1[/url]
[url=http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48157283/]Chapter
2[/url]
[url=http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49198822/]Chapter
3[/url]
[url=http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49877800/]Chapter
4[/url]
Chapter 5
[b]Drawings of
the Characters[/b]
[url=http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52165869/]Sketch of Cast
1[/url]
Enjoy. And if you don’t enjoy, feel free to shoot me. 
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Well , i’m a big fan of emotions , drama to be percise (
except fightning , fighting is wrong) , and I’m also one of the first , if not the first ( though there are more
now ) ‘Cars’ fanfic writers who have posted there’s on Pixar Planet , and I have to say this is very good . So
there’s no need to shoot you , maybe cry , but not shoot you .
in short : very good so far .
Oh yeah! 
so, ramones mummy died? 
cool beginning though
no, i’n not going to shoot you.
[size=92]gottalovepixar - Aww. ^^; I’m sorry if I caused some tears.
CarFreak - Yurp… and
at ten years old, too… But anyway, thankies.[/size]
Mitch
#5
To tell you
the truth, this is actually quite good – very beautifully written. I love how you tell the story from Ramone’s
point of view, and the way it is constructed really adds personality, depth, and heart to the plot-line.
Great work! Keep it up.
– Mitch
[size=92]Thanks, Mitch. 
Now… is there anything WRONG with the story? Cuz I must
know.[/size]
Mitch
#7
Pixel Candy - No problem!
And nope – I don’t see anything wrong with the story at all, except for the fact that you spelled ‘tires’ as
‘tyres’.
By the way, I love your new signature picture. 
[size=92]Oh, in NZ we spell “tire” differently. Lol.
XD
Thanks. I’m weird…[/size] 
Nothing’s really wrong
, although I guess you could’ve made it a bit longer and said why she died .
it’s alright if i cry .
it’s what i usually do when i read/see/hear something sad . I always cry when Coral dies .
[size=92]I have this weird thing about
keeping one part of a story all one on page when working in MS Word… I dunno, I’m too picky. 
She
died in a crash, but that’s said later on.
Crying is a good thing. ^^[/size]
[b]UPDATE: Chapter 1, everybody.
[/b]
Oh! ramone’s got a special friend, and that last sentence heh he’s so bad !
[size=92]-nods- He’s mischievous and yet
ever so good at art. -nudges Ramone- Hey, I think you like that Honda… x)
Ramone: 
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oh so that why he’s a paint body artist
Aww poor Ramone! I feel
bad for him! Anyway, it’s a good story so far. I like how he acts in art class. I wonder what he and that Honda
would have done had he not gotten in trouble?
Really , I always thught she just
liked him and he didn’t really , he just wanted to be friends , ya’ know ?
I wonder when Flo comes in .
I mean , will it only be in motorama girls , or did he know her from a while ago , and didn’t see her again
until there , and didn’t notice that was her until he saw her in his shop , since she was older .
I
don’t know , these are just some predictions here . Not to mention this story makes me want to go write a fanfic
on doc’s life . I got dibs lennonluvr9 !
Mitch
#17
Nice chapter,
Pixel Candy. You certainly have something going there. Keep up the good work!
Ahh…I see. Heheh – I thought it might have been something like that. My mistake.
[size=92]lennonluvr9 -
They would have spent some time together… possibly romantic stuff. They have a small bond between
them.
gottalovepixar - Flo comes, like… much, MUCH later… And yes, it will be a retelling of the
Motorama Girls deleted scene.
Thanks, Mitch. [/size]
I can’t believe I forgot about this
question . What color is his paintjob at the moment ? He’s known for so many colors , I can’t pick the one that
would be his original . I mean , I doubt he’s painting himself every day .
[size=92]gottalovepixar - Well, I assure you I
did draw an adolescent version of Ramone and he has mid-blue paint. He did actually paint himself at that age
though (much to his father’s annoyance) and has a yellow streaky mark running down either side of him. So…
yeah. Blue and yellow.[/size]