[b]Update: Finished Chapter 2, people. 
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Woah ! Ramone got pretty angry
there ! 
I love your style of writing – it is very artistically
done. Nice work on the second chapter there, Pixel Candy. I’m anxious to read the
next one.
You know what it reminds me of? The Parent Trap – the newer
version, with Lindsay Lohan. In the film, one of the girls’ dads falls for another woman who only cares about
the money and nothing about her fiance’s daughter. Kind of similar to Ramone’s situation in this case. It’s
fun to compare the two. 
By the way, you might want to warn your readers that some language is involved
in that particular chapter, just in case. There are some young members on this board. Other than that, your story
is going great. 
[size=92]gottalovepixar - Yep. He really hates Tina.
But then again, who wouldn’t hate her? She’s pretty heartless. 
Thanks again,
Mitch. :3 I haven’t seen that film yet, but it looks quite interesting and I ought
to see it one day. And yeah, I probably should have warned ya about the language. Watch the potty-mouth,
Ramone!
Ramone: -_- Whatever.[/size]
Aww,
Ramone has so much angst! And not just teenage angst! But a good chapter just the same, introducing more
conflict and stuff
[size=92]Angstaaay. 
Thanks, lennonluvr9.
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[b]Update: I just discovered that my story got STOLEN! 
Over
here:
fanfiction.net/s/3376548/1/
I’m so angry. 
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That’s the
problem with writing stories on the internet: they can get stolen and publicized without permission. I hate it
when people do that…
I’m sorry your idea got nabbed. Perhaps you could write to the thief about it
and settle a compromise?
On the plus side: Your story got three positive
reviews from readers, which means that they at least like it. 
I say u tell fanfiction.net . they can do something ,
right ? either that or somehow get a copyright licence for ur story .
[size=92]I ended up joining the site just so I could alert the mods and comment on the story saying
“OMG YOU STOLED IT”. …But I barely know my way around that site and I can’t find a way to comment.
I did send a report, though.[/size]
with it , u should have sent a copy of the story from deviantart.com . if they notice , they
will know that you posted yours before they posted their copy .
[size=92]I did. I sent all three links. 
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(sigh) thats a relief . i was gonna say if not , they might not believe you . good thing you
did .
[size=92]Yup.
^^
…And I finally found out how to comment. -stupid- 
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[b]Update: After I talked to them, the thief took the story down, which was very
considerate of them. Thanks for taking it down. [/b]
[b]UPDATE: 'Tis Chapter 3 at last, muahaha.
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lol with the evil laugh ! And just like lennonluvr9 did when i wrote my fanfic , i sense trouble , and
plenty of it !
[size=92]Hehe,
yep! ^^[/size]
just read your fan fic.
WOW !!! it goes
straight to the heart… sigh
poor ramone! he really must have felt miserable…
btw, i also had a
stepmother. she was a very sinister person, just like that one in the fairytale, and she really gave me a hard
time whenever she could. so i can imagine pretty good how he must feel now…
oh, i hope his date with
sara wil cheer him up a little…
young ramone, the troublemaker… this is gorgeous!!
i have a stepdad ,
but i’m lucky , he nice and loves me and my sister as much as his children ( 3 to be exact ) .
I see
stuff like this , and not only do i feel bad for the kids , i feel bad for the author , because somehow , they
must have coped with it .
Either that or they saw it tv !