A very thrilling read, TSS. I’m wondering who the mysterious person could be that kicked Violet. 
Before she passed out, she managed to see her mother picking her daughter up, and carrying her away.
There was another mother and her child on the beach as well as Violet? That sentence is a bit confusing because it changes from first to third person mid-sentence.
Other than that I can’t wait to read what happens next!
my point as well but it worked for a closing sentence.
Thanks for reading rachel. I’ll fix that mistake right away.
Time for a new chapter!
Chapter 9: Report
Elastigirl carried her daughter to the plane. Minutes later, the family departed from Nomanisan. She laid Invisigirl down on a seat and immediately started to worry about her.
“Bob, is she going to be okay?”
Mr. Incredible shook his head. “I don’t know honey.” He looked at her daughter solemnly.
“What happened to her?” Speedster wondered, a little anxiously.
No one said anything, they were too distressed with their defeated daughter. A little while later, Rick called the family to the back of the plane for a mission debriefing. Mr. Incredible and Stpeedster headed toward the back of the plane. Mr. Incredible turned to his wife.
“You coming honey?” he questioned.
Elastigirl shook her head. “I’ll stay here.”
Mr. Incredible nodded his head and instantly followed his son to give Rick a mission report. Meanwhile, Elastigirl took Invisigirl’s mask off of her face. She began to cry.
“Oh Violet, how could this happen to you? Please be alright! Please be okay!” cried a teary Elastigirl.
Suddenly, but slowly, Violet started to wake. She slowly opened her eyes.
“M. . . mom?”
“Oh Violet, thank goodness!” Elastigirl started to hug her daughter really tightly, tears streaking out of her eyes.
“Mom. . . mom. . . I can’t breathe.” gaged Violet.
Elastigirl released her and kissed her on the forehead. After that, she started to stroke Violet’s long black hair. During that time, it was extremely quiet. Finally, after many long minutes of complete, utter silence, Violet spoke.
“Mom. . . I. . . I’m. . . I’m sorry.”
“For what sweetie?” inquired Elastigirl.
“For not being as heroic as you, dad or Dash.”
The caring, super mother placed a finger on her daughter’s lips. “Hush now Vi. You tried your hardest on that island. It wasn’t your fault that you ended up like this. Not at all. What you did today sweetie, is something not many Supers out there would ever do. You have displayed great courage for your first ever High Level Mission. I’m very proud of you Violet.” Elastigirl gave her daughter another kiss on the forehead. “Get some rest now sweetie, you’ve had a hard day today.”
As soon as Elastigirl left, the young Super smiled, then fell asleep.
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Meanwhile;
“I see.” said Rick. “So according to both yours and your son’s story, I can assume the these robots also attacked your wife and daughter too.”
“That’s correct. Dash and I fought them off without any problems.” Mr. Incredible replied.
“Mom had an encounter with one too.” Dash added. “It looks like she managed to deal with it easily. But my sister wasn’t really lucky."
“Yes,” Rick replied, “that reminds me. Do you by chance know what your daughter found?”
The whole family thought. A moment of silent thinking followed. Finally, Mr. Incredible spoke.
“Actually, we don’t know. She was so beaten up, and we were so worried about her.”
“Bob, you know that it is extremely essential that we must know everything that happened on Nomanisan while you and your family. . .”
“Yea, we know.” interrupted Elastigirl. “But Violet had a rough day for her first Special Mission. She is tired and hurt. Just let her rest okay.”
Rick nodded. The rest of the family enjoyed their trip back to Metroville. Once they landed, Mr. Incredible carried her daughter in his arms and placed her in the front seat of the Incredibile. After they picked up Jack-Jack, the family drove home. Elastigirl carried her daughter up to her room and placed her on her bed. She took off her mask. Helen sighed and kissed the young thrashed teen on the head. She started to wake very slowly.
“M. . . m. . . mom?” moaned Violet.
“Hey there sweetie.” smiled Helen. “You have been sleeping for some time. How do you feel?”
“Okay I guess.”
Violet tried to sit up, but as soon as she did, pain rushed through her entire body. She flinched in pain and collapsed on her bed.
Elastigirl wrapped her arms around Vi. “Easy honey, easy."
Once the pain surging through Violet’s body had finally subsided, she inhaled and breathed out a deep sigh. Helen started to stroke Violet’s long dark hair. Afterwards, Violet spoke.
“Hey mom, forgive me.”
Helen was confused. “For what? Is it about today?”
Violet said nothing but answered, “Well, a little bit.”
“Oh honey, don’t get yourself down. You did your best. That is all you could do.”
“But mom, I. . .”
Helen consoled. “Violet, I know how you feel. You must feel very miserable about what happened today. But you shouldn’t. You have to understand, maybe you weren’t ready for something like this. Believe me Violet. Not every Super can go though a first day without some problems.”
“It’s not that.” said Violet.
“Oh, what is it?” Helen wondered.
“I wanted to say sorry for getting beat up like this.”
Helen sighed. She did not say a word for quite some time.
“Honey. . . when we found you. . .” Helen was speechless. She could not find the words. “Well, we saw you. . . and you scared me half to death. I thought you were going to die! What happened?”
Violet was silent. Finally, “Mom, please, let’s not talk about it.”
Helen understood. She got up, kissed Violet on the head one more time, and walked out of the room. At last, it was just Violet by herself in her room. She sat up on her bed, despite the pain the surged throughout her body. She went to the bathroom, took off her Super Suit, and stepped into the shower. After a long warm wash, she felt more relaxed. After she dried her hair, she went to her closet and picked out of lavender pajamas. She tucked her self into bed and stared out the room. After a long, miserable, grueling day, she smiled. Maybe, just maybe, tomorrow will be better.
great way of making the reader emotional about her injuries…well done.
Almost had me crying…
Whoa now Al-Bob. Get a hold of yourself!
But I’m glad you liked it.
I love it! 
Sorry…something just gets me when i read about people and their pain. I guess you could say i’m a sucker to fictional people in pain. Probabely becuse i have felt some serious pain in my life.
Jumper5: Keep check for updates dude. You’ll love it more the more you read.
Al-Bob: Ah, I see.
I feel really sorry for Violet, right now in the story. Won’t you just give her a break? 
It’s good to read how the family supported her, and I like how she was the only one to not defeat the robot. Just a tip: before you post each chapter, maybe you could get into the habit of reading each chapter out loud to yourself, so you can catch any spelling mistakes and see how the story flows. I used to do this with my assignments at school and it really works. Keep up the great writing. =)
You tired your hardest on that island.
Tried?
heheheh…[clears throat]
Rachel…he’s on a role don’t disrupt him.
Thanks rachel for finding my mistakes. I guess I was in a hurry to post that chapter up. I’ll double check next time.
That’s fine we all do it…
I don’t remember exactly the time when I posted my chapter, but I had a feeling that it was going to be late if I didn’t post it at that time. But oh well, all is good. Expect another chapter sometime next week.
You posted the last one at 10;49 at night my time (Arizona)
so it could have been 1;00 in the morning…yah i could see grammer problems at that time.
Nah, I lived on the west side of america, and I strictly said I was going to update every tuesday. Thats why I scurried.
ahhhhh…California
yep, good ol Cali!
New chapter!!!
Chapter 10: School
The next morning finally came at the Parr’s residence. Helen woke up Dash. He bolted out of bed and took a quick shower, got changed, and rushed downstairs for breakfast. He was surprised to see his sister, wide awake, eating a bowl of cereal.
“Good morning Dash!” Violet greeted cheerfully.
Dash stared at her oddly. “Uh. . . hi Vi.”
Violet giggled. She got up and placed her bowl by the kitchen sink. Just then, Helen enters the kitchen.
“Good morning Violet. You are up early today.”
Violet beamed at her mother and walked away. Moments later, she, Dash, Jack-Jack, and Helen all got into the car and drove off. First, Helen dropped off Dash at his elementary school. Later, she drove to Violet’s school.
“Hey sweetie,” said Helen.
“Mom, don’t worry.” replied Vi as if she knew what her mother was going to ask. “I am fine. I just want everything to be back the normal way it was.”
Helen smiled and finally, they arrived at Western View Junior High. Violet got out of the car and retrieved her backpack from the trunk. She waved to her mom good-bye. Before she turned around, Jack-Jack shook his tiny little arm.
“Bye-Bye.” he cooed.
Violet smiled and blew a kiss to his baby brother. Finally, she turned and walked through the doors of her school. Violet strolled to her locker and placed all of her textbooks, notebooks and other supplies in it. Five minutes later, the bell rang, signaling her first period class. Violet closed her locker and walked off to her PE class.
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During PE, everyone was forced to play dodge ball. This was Violet’s least favorite sport. The teams were divided and it was Violet and practically everyone else versus the popular bunch of people. Minutes later, balls were thrown, and the game started. Violet was not the fastest player, nor did she have the strongest throwing arm. She had many advantages over everyone else. Such include great agility, endurance and defensive skills, all of which she uses when she fights against crime. The game took as long as thirty minutes. Soon, it came down to Violet on one side and Britney and her gang on the other. The girls weren’t really tired because all they did was wait and did nothing. Violet, on the other hand, was very exhausted. She was panting rather heavily. Fortunately she had all of the balls on her side of the court. She took them all one by one and threw them hard at the other team. The balls hit the girls one by one. It was over. Violet was declared the victor.
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A couple of minutes later, the bell rang. She had science next. After taking down more notes, she did a chemistry lab. Science was not her favorite subject but Violet did indeed have a solid “A”, which she was happy for. Her parents, have stressed the importance of her schooling over fighting crime. If she had any "C"s or lower, she would not only be grounded from patroling and saving the world, but in addition, she couldn’t hang out with her friends or Tony.
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During the passing period, Violet went to her locker to retrieve her English textbook and notebook. She had just closed her locker when she saw Tony Rydinger. Violet ran over to Tony leapt into him and wrapped her arms around her boyfriend. Violet had a feeling of safeness in her.
“Uh. . . hi Violet.” Tony said, trying to ignore the people staring at him.
Violet continued to snuggle with Tony like a teddy bear. Five minutes later, the bell rang. Violet quickly planted a kiss on Tony’s cheek and happily walked over to her English class.
“Hmmm, awkard.” said Tony as he walked to his next class.
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Violet couldn’t have enjoyed English class more. Today, she studied poetry, ans she got a chance to write her own. She wrote a poem about her and her boyfriend Tony in a beautiful meadow with flowers blooming all around, a rainbow shining in the sky, and cute animals scurrying everywhere.
“Okay class, who would like to share their poems?” asked Violet’s teacher. “Uh. . . Violet, how about you.”
Violet snapped out of her daydream and looked at her teacher. She then looked down at her poem with out saying a word. Vi slowly got out of her seat and walked uncomfortably to the front of the room. She stared at her class as sweat dripped down her head. She grew redder and redder every passing second. She was about to start when. . .
“RRRRRIIIIINNNNNGGGGG”
“Oh never mind Violet.” the teacher sighed.
“That was close.” Violet thought as she went to her math class.
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During her class, she did some homework and then, got a test back. She was ecstatic to know she had received an A+ on her test. Violet beamed with joy and continued to work on classwork.
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The bell rang, and Violet went to get her backpack and went to lunch. It didn’t take long before she found Tony sitting alone under the shade. Violet went up to him and sat by him.
“Hey Tony!”
“Uh, hi Violet. You are overly happy today.”
Violet just flashed a cute smile. “Yeah, I know.”
Violet took out a sandwich and took a big bite. Tony just sat and stared at Violet. He could not help gazing at her blue eyes, her shining dark hair, her cute face, and her elegant smile. Violet finished her sandwich and looked at Tony.
“Tony, it is impolite to stare.” she said.
Tony snapped out of his trance. “Sorry Vi. I can’t help it that you are so beautiful.”
Violet began to blush. They spent the rest of lunch talking and laughing with each other. Soon, the bell rang, signaling the end of lunch. Violet waved to Tony and went to her next class.
Finally, Violet went to her History class. She learned about the Civil War and Abraham Lincoln. She took down notes and later had a test.
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Soon, the bell rang. Violet waited under a tree for her mom. She smiled, brushed some hair out of her face and behind her ear, and waited. Suddenly heard Tony walking down the hallway. She hid behind the tree and made her head invisible to listen in on Tony’s conversation with his friends.
“Oh come on Rydinger. Go on.” Violet heard.
“Stop it guys. You are embarrassing me. Violet could be eavesdropping or something.” Tony panicked.
“Come one Rydinger. Go on and ask her.” nudged one friend. “It has been almost two weeks since you two last went out.”
Violet gasped in excitement. Her heart was beating so fast, she didn’t know what was happening.
“Well. . .” Tony said with a little discomfort.
Violet’s head became visible again and she excitedly hopped out of the shade.
“Hi Tony.” she squeaked. She too was a little shy about talking to him, especially in front of other people.
“Well, gotta go Rydinger.”
The two boys left, leaving the two teenagers alone by the school steps. Both faces were red and blushing. Violet looked down at her flip flops as Tony eyed the sky whistling, hands in his pockets.
“Uh, hi Violet.” Tony managed to say.
“You, uh. . . wanted to ask me something Tony?” stuttered Violet a bit.
“Well. . . I was. . . it’s nothing.” Tony stammered quickly.
Violet’s smile faded away. She looked down at the ground. “Oh. . . I see, that’s okay.”
At that moment, she heard the honking of a car horn. It was Helen, with Dash and Jack-Jack in the back.
“Well, I guess I’ll see you tomorrow.” muttered Violet.
She turned and headed toward her mother’s car. Tony looked at her, quickly regained his composure and called her out again.
“Violet?”
Violet had just grabbed the handle of her car. She turned to look at Tony. Tony knew this wasn’t going to be easy because Violet’s mom and brother (not counting Jack-Jack be cause he is a baby) were watching.
“I was just. . . wondering. . . if you. . . would you. . .” he faltered with his words.
“Yeah?” Vi asked with a little exhilaration.
“Would you like to go out on a date with me sometime over the weekend?” Tony finally spoke.
Violet’s eyes and mouth widened. “Of course Tony!”
She leapt into his arms and squeezed him tight.
“Uh Vi, we are still at school. And Dash is giving me this funny look.” reminded Tony.
Violet release him with a sense of uneasiness. She got into her mother’s car.
“Could you meet me at my house at 11:00 this Saturday okay?” she told Tony.
Tony said nothing but gave a smile and a wink. Helen drove off. This day could not have been more perfect for Violet. She got her revenge against the girl that hated her the most, she has a very good day at school, and Tony asked her out after two weeks. Violet sighed in romance. Everything was perfect. . . well, until Dash and Jack-Jack started to tease her.
She sure seems to be in a good mood this day. That would be impossible for me if I went through the same thing. Good for Vi. I hope to read about that mysterious stranger again soon.