Oh you will seeoner than you think BBD. BUt thanks for the review.
Okay since we made a deal TSS i’m going to need to start being harder on you 
Just kidding but i will try to give reports that are more strict on certain areas like redability and blah blah blah…
anyhow.
It looks really good and i hope the next chapter will finish up that discussion between those boys.
Actually, if I remember correctly, my next chapter i going to be Violet’s date with Tony.
Anything they’re going to uncover??
That would lead into the next one.
What are you talking about Al-Boob? What chapter are you on?
The one your coming out with soon…i’m just wondering if anything will be said that will reveal another mystery.
You know like some sort of wild fact that is actually really important to the storyline.
Please correct that…its rather embarrising 
Well, something will happen, but I won’t say when. All I’ll say something will show sooner than you think.
Well that sounds like music to my ears. Will stay on edge of my seat
[slips off]
ouff!!
Expect an update on Tuesday.
We have the whole seat, but we’ll only need the edge. 
(know what I mean?)
Here is the next chapter. I hope you like the ending of it.
Chapter 11: The Date
The weekend couldn’t have gone faster. It was now Saturday. Violet was so anxious. She was sitting on her couch, waiting for Tony to arrive at 11:00. It was now 10:50. Violet waited patiently.
“Violet, honey?” It was Helen. She arrived at the family room and sat next to Violet.
“Hi mom.” Vi replied.
Helen smiled. “You go on and have fun okay. Let me give you some spending money.”
“Oh thanks mom. Let me get my purse upstairs.”
Violet got off of the couch and headed upstairs into her room. Helen went to find her purse. Minutes later, a knock was heard by the door.
“I GOT IT!” yelled Dash, sprinting toward the door. He opened it and right in front of him was Tony Rydinger.
“Hello,” greeted Tony, “I came to pick up Violet.”
“I’m sorry but the monestrous beast isn’t ready right now. . .”
“DASH!”
Dash turned around and saw Violet, with her arms folded, glaring at him. Dash gave an uneasy smile and started to walk away. Violet sighed and looked at Tony.
“Sorry about the pest Tony.”
Tony laughed. Soon, the two got into Tony’s parents’ car and drove off.
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Vi and Tony talked to each other during the trip to the mall. Their conversation would include school, their family and, to Violet’s delight, they even talked about Invisigirl. Violet blushed with every comment that came out of Tony’s mouth.
“I swear. She is so amazing, even incredible. After all, she is the all famous daughter of The Incredibles.” Tony praised.
Violet tried her hardest not to expose her blushing. “Tony stop please.” she thought.
At last, they arrived at Downtown Metroville. Violet and Tony got out of the car and headed into Metoville’s Grand Mall, the biggest mall in the city of Metroville. The couple entered the gigantic shopping place. Hundreds of people were at the mall, shopping and browsing. Violet and Tony walked together, entering store after store. They didn’t really buy anything. The only thing that was purchased was a small bracelet for Violet. This bracelet had purple and clear beads. In the center was a violet flower bead. Violet beamed with happiness.
Two hours past, and Violet and Tony left the mall. They decided to take a little walk around the city. Holding each other’s hand, the two made their way toward Metroville’s Seaport. They enjoyed a marvelous view of the ocean while delighting each other’s company.
“Tony?” said Violet.
“Yes Vi?” he answered.
“Thank you for taking me out. I really had so much fun being here with you.
“Anything for you Vi.”
Violet blushed a little, then gazed into Tony’s eyes. Tony also stared at Violet’s cute, blue eyes. Their faces moved inches closer to each other. They were about to kiss, when. . .
“HELP!” Someone shouted.
Violet and Tony instantly looked around, confused about what was happening. All of the sudden, Violet saw a tower of black smoke coming from a building nearby. She also saw an uncontrollable crowd of people running toward them. As the chaotic crowd ran though, Tony was desperately trying to find Violet. He pushed his way person after person, calling Vi’s name.
“VIOLET!” he screamed. “VIOLET, WHERE ARE YOU?”
Finally, he saw her. The thing was, she was running toward the direction the crowd was running from. As Violet ran toward the burning building, the crowd pushed Tony farther and farther until he disappeared in the ocean of people.
A really romantic couple of chapters, TSS. It was good to read Violet being happy instead of, you know, mopey. Heh. And you’ve written in the little details of their dating life very well. Just a question: does Tony know that Violet is Invisigirl?
As of now, Tony does not know that Violet is his favorite Super Hero.
But in my first story I ever wrote, Tony finds out who Violet is rather quickly.
Great idea about keeping her identity secret…really enjoyed the way the chapter laid the event of his guessing who she is. He should start to feel suspicious due to her actions. Great Chapter…can’t wait to see who is behind the smoke…
Who ever said anyone was behind it Al-Bob? What if it was just an accident?
in a story something has to happen that is beyond the normal, past the expected, something unusual…
If nothing ever happened that was of the above then it would be a history lesson…
Who also said that this thing is the unusual part? Maybe something after the fire or maybe even before could be something unexpected.
Come on… 
there has to be something…but we will find out won’t we.
If you think there is something? Let me hear your thoughts? nothing wrong with an early prediction huh? 