Fine sure…i believe that the fire will prove less accidental then it looks. It will become quite a problem for Violet.
In what way(s) will it become a problem for Violet?
Ooh, some Viony time!
Just wondering, though, why would Tony keep on talking about Invisigirl if he doesn’t know it’s Violet? To him, it’s like talking about another girl.
I get that alot about Tony fantasizing about Invisigirl in front of Violet. But I believe that even really close couples (myself included) often fantasize about our dream dates. Just because you have a boyfriend or a girlfriend, it doesn’t mean you can’t dream can you?
ya [sighs]…[clears throat]…nevermind.
I really wanna tell ou guys what happens next, but I just like it when you guys have a few predictions.
i think she will find herself “knee-deep-in-the-big-muddy”
meaning-some bad guy has to be behind this and he will cuase trouble for her.
That could be a possibility.
WHat I do is after I write a chapter, I think what do other people think. As you said, the option of someone behind it sounds convincing. However, it also could be just an accident. Or maybe ther point of the fire is just a distraction from something else. Or maybe there is another option that I can’t think of right now. . . 
hm…a distraction? for what reason would someone distract you?
Al-Bob, remember. My previous post is a breakdown of every possibility for my next chapter, just something to think about before I start writing it.
It could be a distraction from some evil villain, planning something diabolical while the world’s best Supers are taking care of the fire.
That is a possibliity.
or while the police respond…maybe he could stop at the jail and release the prisoners becuase of the loss of police officers at hand.
Hey, that is a possibility as well.
You all wanna know what happens next? Here you go!
Chapter 12: The Fire
Violet saw that the flames were coming from an apartment building. She slipped into an alley nearby, took her super suit, gloves, boots, and mask out from her purse and quickly changed.
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Firefighters sprayed their hoses onto the fire. Other firefighters escorted people out of the blazing building. Invisigirl materialized next to a firefighter.
“Sir, how is everything going?” she asked.
“Oh thanks for coming Invisigirl.” replied the firefighter. “But it is dangerous for Super children like you. We have. . .”
Suddenly, Invisigirl heard a woman screaming at the top of her lungs. A firefighter was trying to console her. Invisigirl rushed over to see what was wrong.
“Madam, please. It’s too dangerous to go back in there!
“BUT MY CHILD IS STILL IN THERE!” she yelled.
“I’ll get her!” Invisigirl volunteered as she darted into the building.
“No, Invisigirl! Come back! It’s too dangerous!” yelled a fireman.
It was too late. Invisigirl was already in the building and went to search for the endangered kid. As she searched the building, Invisigirl listened for the sound of a kid yelling for help.
“HELP! SOMEONE HELP ME PLEASE!”
Invisigirl heard the cry. It was coming from upstairs. “Hang on I’m coming!”
Before she headed to the level above her, the ceiling above her crumbled and fell. She jumped out of the way before it collapsed on top of her. Invisigirl got to her feet a little uneasily. She sighed a breath of relief and darted toward the floor above her.
Invisigirl was getting hot and dehydrated. She felt like she was walking in an oven. She wiped the sweat from her face and pressed on, but it seemed like the longer she searched, the hotter it got. She had trouble breathing the longer she stayed in the burning apartment. At last, she figured out where the sound of the wailing child was coming from. She kicked down an unstable door and found a little three-year-old girl, wrapped in a large wet towel, coughing.
“Don’t worry. I’m here to help.” Invisigirl said.
“Invisigirl, get me out please!” the kid cried.
Invisigirl carried the three-year old child in her arms. She tried to getting out of the burning building. She made her way through unsteady floors and falling pieces of ceiling from above. Seconds later, Invisigirl got to the staircase. That was when she heard the floor below her begin to crumble. All of the sudden, the floor gave out. The next thing Invisigirl saw was that she was falling toward ground level. Hastily, she formed a force field around herself and the kid. Fortunately, the purple orb floated safely down. Unfortunately, as soon as Invisigirl’s force field landed, she fell on her hands and knees, panting excessively. Because she was weary, out of breath, and dehydrated, after saving herself and the three-year-old kid from a broken leg, her energy got totally depleted. She was so fatigued, she couldn’t stand up.
“Invisigirl, come on. We are almost there!” whined the child.
The teenaged heroine tried to get to her feet but collapsed and fell smack right on her face. As the child tried to pull the teenaged heroine to the exit. That was when, a crumbling noise was heard throughout the entire building. Invisigirl looked up in horror and knew the worst was about to come true. The building was going to crumble down on top of them. The child screamed at the top of her lungs. Invisigirl summoned the last of her strength to cover the little kid. She prepared herself for death as the building came collapsing down, with the three-year-old girl safe.
At the last moment, Invisigirl felt paralyzed. A light blueish beam had her trapped in an immobilized state. The beam lifted her in the air and, with great and incredible force, slammed the teen hero through the wall of the building before it collapsed on top of her. She dragged along the street; the child, still safe in her arms.
A crowd gathered around Invisigirl, who was dazed and barely conscious. The three-year-old girl left the young heronie’s arms and ran to her mother, embracing in each other’s arms. Invisigirl laid on the street. The crowd of people gathered around the fatigued heroine. Then, from out of nowhere, a new Super walked through the crowd of people. Men, women, boys, and girls all stared at this masked person in tights.
“Stand back people.” he commanded.
The people all backed away. The super placed a hand over Invisigirl’s body. A bright, pink light flashed, blinding everyone who watched. When the light faded, the Super backed away from Invisigirl. Immediately, her eyes shot wide open. She was healed. She got up and wanted to thank the person who revitalized her. What she saw next almost made her fall back down to the street, shocked.
“SYNDROME!”
Oooh, what a twist in the ending of that story, TSS. Even though I should have known from the title of this fanfiction, it totally surprised me. You give a really good insight on how physically taxing superhero work is, and also a talent for writing great cliffhangers. Can’t wait for the next instalment. =)
oh boy 
who else to save someone he can use…
I don’t think Syndrome saving Invisigirl was a coincident. He has something he wants from her in my opinion. Great chapter anyway TSS…i could really smell the smoke and see the building fall.
If you like this chapter, you will probably be surprsied of what happens next. THanks for the comments rachel.
Al-Bob: Glad you enjoyed it.
My hunch is that Syndrome will butter Invisigirl up to make her like him for saving her. phew…
That could be a possibility. You want to expand on that theory or come up with other possiblities?
I think that Invisigirl will cross over to the dark side. 
[in dark voice]
I Am Your Cousin!!