TSS's Fanfiction: The Incredibles: Syndrome's Return

Here is the next chapter everyone!

Chapter 15: Syndrome a Hero?

The very next day, Helen was washing dishes. Dash and Bob were away somewhere. Jack-Jack was taking a nap in his play pen. Violet was upstairs in her room, writing in her diary. She recorded her date with Tony, (and how guilty she felt abandoning him to rescue the people in the building that was on fire), and she noted Syndrome’s reappearance. She had just finished her entry when she heard a knock on the door.

“Violet honey,” called Helen from the other side.

Violet got up and opened the door. “Yes mom?”

“Rick wants to talk to us at NSA’s HQ right now.”

Violet nodded. She left her room and followed her mother downstairs. Helen stretched her arms 20 feet to Jack-Jack’s play pen. She lifted the infant up, waking the baby in the process. Helen tickled cute, little, baby Jack-Jack on the tummy while Violet kissed him on the nose.

“Ma Ma, Bi let.” he cooed.

Violet giggled. For months, she had been trying to get Jack-Jack to say her name. “Bi liet,” wasn’t perfect, but it was progress.

Helen, Violet and Jack-Jack went to the fireplace located in the family room. Helen reached in and touched the back of the fireplace three times in a specific area. The fireplace rose up and revealed the elevator leading to the NSA’s Headquarters. Violet and Helen placed on their masks and placed Jack-Jack’s on before entering the elevator. They rode it down below the surface of the earth. The steel doors opened, revealing a gigantic but main lobby room. Helen and Vi were greeted by workers, and Supers passing by. Finally, they arrived at the front desk.

“Can I help you?” the desk clerk politely asked.

“Yes, we are scheduled to meet with the Chief Executive of the National Supers Agency.” answered Helen.

“Excuse me for a minute.” the clerk smiled. She tapped a little red button located at the top on a little speaker box. “Rick, Elastigirl and Invisigirl are here to see you.”

“Send them up.” said Rick’s gruffly voice.

The desk clerk looked at the two Supers and smiled. “He is waiting for you on the top floor.”

Helen and Violet thanked the clerk and made their way toward the elevator. Before riding the elevator to the top floor, they went to another level. This level was a daycare center. Young Supers from infants to five-year-olds were placed in this special center. The room size was in between medium and large. Rainbows were painted along the top and bottom edges of the indestructible walls. Hand-drawn pictures of a Super Heroes were taped onto the wall. These pictures included drawings of the kids’ favorite heroes, and a drawing of one Super Dad saving a school bus from driving off a cliff. There were shelves, all filled with blocks, toys and even stuff for small baby supers. On one wall was a door. This door was a little emergency room. Just in case some unnatural circumstance, everyone can enter the emergency room. The ER is an elevator that zooms to the surface of the earth.

“Wow, nice place.” remarked Violet. “How come I never stayed here? When you and dad were busy?”

Helen laughed. “Violet honey, when you were young, us Supers had to go into hiding. They had to shut HQ down.”

A middle-aged woman wearing rubber gloves walked in. She carried in a tray with food. She set it down on a table.

“Hello dear Helen. Haven’t seen you in ages.” she said.

She gave a brief hug to Helen and Violet. The lady took Jack-Jack in her arms. She took off a glove and started stoking Jack-Jack’s face. It was the softest feeling he had ever felt in his life. After that, he felt a sensation of warmness. He slowly started to fall asleep.

“It will take a couple minutes. Is that too much to handle for you?”

“Helen honey, this is why I run the Daycare Center for Supers. They don’t call me Silk for nothing you know. With a touch, your baby should stay asleep for about an hour.”

“Thank you.” said Helen. She and Violet left and entered the elevator. The two Super ladies rode the elevator up to where Rick’s office was located at. The elevator doors opened.

“Ah Helen and Violet. We have been waiting for you.” greeted Rick.

Dash and Bob was there too. They were sitting on comfy business chairs, waiting for the two to arrive. Violet and Helen sat down in two empty business chairs.

“I’m sure that you all want answers. Well before I tell you that, first you all must know that we found Syndrome stopping a runaway bus. I know you will hate to hear this, but many people would have been killed if it wasn’t for him.”

“So what is all this about?” Dash asked impolitely.

“Well, you all know that Supers are neither allowed to roam in public, nor perform heroic duties without identification and a license.”

“Yes, we know that. In fact, as soon as we discovered our kids had super powers, we contacted the NSA immediately.” said Bob.

“Well Bob, we caught Syndrome without either a license or any identification on him proving that he was a Super.”

“Oh my! Did you arrest him?” questioned Helen.

“We were going to, but there was one. . . minor obstacle in our way.” Rick cleared his throat. “Ever since Violet first encountered him, he has been saving many innocent lives. “He caught about ten robbers in about one hour,” our witnesses and analyzers concluded and reported. And of course, if you have a really larger-than-life hero, there are bound to be large numbers of fans.”

The Parrs gave Rick a very confused look.

Rick sighed. “In short, the reason why we can’t arrest him is because the people of the city would probably be a little aggravated. You know what that means: rebellions, small “human v.s. super” wars, all of that stuff.”

Violet inquired, “But because of his inventions, the government had to pay millions and millions of dollars just for damages. Also, he killed many Supers. I mean the people should know. A life for a life.”

“True Violet, but ever since his return, he has saved more lives than caused more fatalities of Supers, police, and the Army. In a sense, he sort of paid for all of the destruction he caused.”

“So how did you manage to get answers from him?” she asked again.

“When we confronted him, we decided not to arrest him. Instead, we told him that he needed identification and a license to be a Super, or else he would be placed under arrest by the NSA. He went with us to headquarters very quietly. We asked him a couple questions that we would ask any super when obtaining their identification. Somehow, we managed to throw a curveball at him, and he took the bait.”

“That is good to hear.” said Mr. Incredible.

“He told us his real name, Super name, and the list keeps going. However, our interrogators recognized him. Some how, they got him to confess how he survived his little “accident.”

Rick gave a little wink to Bob.

“So how did he do it?” the father asked.

“By using his zero-point-energy beam. His cape got caught in the jet turbine. Well, his cape dragged in but he zapped the beam on himself. Just before any part of his body got sucked in. The cape and maybe one of his rocket boosters that got caught in the turbine caused a malfunction, which caused the explosion. However, the explosion blasted Syndrome miles away from your house.”Rick explained. He took a breath. “Any other questions?”

“How did he get a technology upgrade?” Violet inquired.

“He told us that ever since that day, he was spent day and night, inventing new inventions, gadgets and other stuff.”

“Are you sure he doesn’t have any super powers?” the teen heroine interrogated.

Rick stood up. “Violet, I can assure you and your family that Syndrome does not have any super human blood in his body.”

After the family shook hands with Rick, they picked up Jack-Jack at the daycare center. The family rode the elevator back up to their house. The exited the fire place and went on with their normal lives; Bob went to watch TV, Helen went to bathe Jack-Jack, Dash entered his room and decided to read a book, Violet went to her room to finish her homework.

And since Violet and Helen entered HQ, Syndrome has been saving more lives, and catching more crooks by the minute.

very good TSS…that explains a lot about Syndrome except for his “powers”.

Review-9/10

Well written…very intregging. My guess is that Syndrome is a good guy at the moment but that he will return to his evil ways when he looses or doesn’t get what he wants…

Thats a good prediction Al-Bob. Thanks for the review. :wink:

The suspense just keeps rising, TSS. It’s like Syndrome’s turned from a Mr. Hyde to a Dr. Jekyll (from the classic horror story), with split personalities. And good explanation of how Syndrome escaped what could have been his death.

Thanks BDDD. Coming up how Syndrome survived was ultimately one of my biggest challenges, because we saw in the movie that he was killed by his cape. I believe I went through about 5-10 different ways he could’ve survived.

Here is chapter 16 everyone.

Chapter 16: Mundane Monday

Violet woke up in an instant, thanks to Dash’s annoying but effective method of awakening: jumping on the bed, making the bouncing vibration enough to awake her. Dash ran out of the room as soon as Violet’s feet touched the floor.

“I am going to sell you to a zoo one day pest.” mumbled a drowsy girl.

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After breakfast, Helen drove her kids to their respective schools. She managed to drop off Violet a minute before her bell rang.

Violet’s day at school was a rather quiet but peaceful. PE class was physically hard instead of emotionally difficult. Science was interesting as usual, English was. . . normal. It didn’t take long until she found out the reason for all of the tranquillity. She figured it out with a little help of her best friend, Kari Mceean.

“Hey Kari! Over here!” Vi called to her best friend.

“Hey Vi. You will never guess what happened to me last night.” she said, sitting down next to her.

Violet giggled. It is the same answer every time. “Let me guess. You had a strange dream last night?”

“Yes, and as usual, it had weird people with strange abilities.”

“Do tell the summary of last night’s dream.” Violet begged, with a little fascination.

“Well, it started with exploding babies and people with fancy haircuts. You were in the dream too: you and your whole family.

Violet giggled. Apperently, when the NSA erased her memory, something in the brain keeps bringing it back up in forms of dreams. Violet wanted to tell her best friend the truth, but knew she wasn’t supposed to.

“Say Kari, things at school have been very quiet today. Do you know why?”

“You haven’t heard?” Kari asked. Violet shook her head. “Last Friday, Brittany and all of her friends cheated on a test. They got suspended for an entire week.”

“Oh wow.” said Vi. “I can’t help but feel sorry for them.”

Violet looked at Kari, who stared back. All of the sudden, a burst of laughter was shared by the two friends.

Violet sighed and went on to eat her lunch. Minutes later, Tony Rydinger came along.

“Hey Violet, can I talk to you?” he asked.

Violet nodded. Both she and Tony walked around the school.

“Violet, I need to ask you something about last night.” Tony said seriously. “I was calling your name at the Seaport during our date when the fire erupted. Didn’t you hear me? You scared me to death after I saw you running toward instead of away from the fire.”

Violet’s body froze in fear. “Invisigirl was needed and I had to. . .” she wanted to tell him. She opened her mouth but the only thing harder for her to think of a reason, was to say it directly in to her boyfriend. Lying was the one of the most unforgiving sins she has ever committed against Tony.

“I. . . I was uh. . . I was. . .” Violet stuttered. Finally, she took a deep breath and said, “I was trying to look for you. I uh, thought I heard your voice. . . um. . . coming from the fire and I tried to look for you.”

Tony stared at Violet for a long time. Afterwards, he smiled. “Violet, don’t worry about me. I don’t want you to get hurt over me.”

Violet smiled. She was glad that Tony was so understanding. No matter what Violet tells him, he would understand. After that, the bell rang. Violet hurried over to her next class.

It was a the end of the day, and Violet was waiting in front of the school for her mom. She was rather surprised to see her father’s car show up. She got in the back seat and saw the entire family was already in.

“Hey what’s going on?” wondered Violet as the family drove off.

Bob pressed a button next to the sound system. A little GPS screen popped out, displaying a map of Metroville, and a the center, was their logo, indicating where their vehicle was at.

Someone has taken someone hostage.” told Bob as he shifted the car into autodrive.

Four pods lowered down on all the occupied seats. While in those pods, an automated, metallic strap fastened the torsos of every member of the family. One half of the metal strap moved up while the other moved down, automatically changing the family into their super suits. The pods lifted up. Mr. Incredible, Elastigirl, Invisigirl, and Speedster placed their mask on their face. The car converted into the Incredibile and sped to the rescue.

ooohhh… more adventure and excitement for Invisigirl.

Did anyone see the family car change in front of the school??

Good question Al-bob. Here is your answer.

Bob put it on autodrive, so it is safe to assume that the car was in motion when everyone was getting dressed up and when the car converted into the Incredibile.

Really creative chapters, TSS. It seemed as if you’ve been watching James Bond movies or something 'cause of all the gadgets you’ve thought up. Syndrome shooting lasers from his eyes? I wanna know what that’s about! And the story covering exactly how he survived that plane explosion was really funny - don’t be surprised if Brad Bird steals it for The Incredibles 2! =)

Thanks for the review rachel!

Okay now i got the last part…well done. It makes perfect mudd…[jk]

Review-9/10

Great! A 9/10. Still waiting for a perfect score though, but I am sure it will come.

it will come…don’t worry it will come…

So far after the 16th Chapter the Review…

Half-Way* Mark Review-9.5/10

Great Job TSS…you have my approval*

[size=84](*even though it doesn’t mean a whole lot)[/size]

Well, if you round it up, then it should mean something.

Hey don’t push it…i could round down you know :laughing:

Well, you gave me a 9.5, and by rule, when you round to the nearest whole number, 5-9 gets rounded up. :stuck_out_tongue:

Here is an update for you all.

Chapter 17: Heroic Deeds

Cops had an apartment building surrounded. Inside was a deranged man. He was holding a little infant and her mother hostage on the second floor. To make matters worse, he has two shotguns. He demanded $500,000, a getaway car, another shotgun, and that no police force of any kind would follow him or else he will kill both the mother and the little baby. Police waited anxiously and nervously. They tried negotiating, but it failed. Just then, the Incredibile drove up. The family got out of the car.

“Ah, the Incredibles.” greeted the Chief. “We are so glad to have you here.”

“No time now. Please explain the situation to us.” Mr. Incredible requested.

The Chief explained about the two hostages, the man, and his demands. "So far, we have his requested getaway car right over there.” he said, pointing out a large, red Jeep. “We also told him that his money is on the driver’s seat of the car. The only reason why he hasn’t come out yet is because we have the entire place surrounded.”

“Sir,” said an officer, “he wants half of the police to leave this place and he will release a captive.”

While the Chief and officers talked, the family of supers got together in a huddle.

“Okay, we’ve got a dangerous situation on our hands here everyone.” he told. Then, he looked at his daughter. Speedster and Elastigirl looked at Invisigirl as well. “Violet, we are counting on you.”

An apprehensive Invisigirl nodded. “Dad, no matter what happens, tell the police not to go in until the hostages and I safely come out.”

Mr. Incredible nodded and went to tell the Chief the plan. The old policeman was a little hesitant sending a fourteen-year-old girl to save a mother and a baby, but negotiations were failing. The situation growing more deadly by the second, and it was the only plan that they got.

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Invisigirl turned invisible and moved swiftly to the apartment. She found an open window and slipped herself inside. She snuck through the hallways quietly, searching for the stairs. Finally, she found a small stair case. She made her way up the steps, concealed in her invisibility, with great silence and stealth.

Invisigirl, through her vigorous training every other weekend at the NSA HQ to help improve, polish, and enhance her powers, has mastered the art of invisibility and force fields. Invisigirl learned how to produce large force fields the size of tall skyscrapers and trained her mind and body to take on powerful hits and still sustain her force field. During her Invisibility training, she learned to not only make herself but other objects and people invisible. In addition, she learned to sneak through places without being detected.

All of this training was put into great use in trying to save the hostages. If the crazy man had heard the sound of someone coming up, both the baby and the mother would be dead instantly.

Invisigirl made her way down the hallways. Finally, she heard a sound of a man screaming at someone. She placed her ear by the door. It sounded like someone was coming. Quickly, Invisigirl moved to the other side of the hallway. The mother was running down the hallway and down the stairs in tears. Invisigirl quickly slipped through the door before the man closed it.

“Okay little baby, it is just you and me now. I don’t have any intention on releasing you.”

Invisigirl had to get the baby out of the building alive. She didn’t see the man picking up his shotgun and cocking it. Invisigirl heard the sound and turned around. The man didn’t know it, but he was aiming his gun at the teen Super instead of the little baby. Invisigirl had no choice. As soon as the man pulled the trigger, she had formed a force field to protect herself. This unfortunately made the man aware that Invisigirl was in the room. The teenaged heroine materialized in front of the man. Before he shot another round, Invisigirl kicked him in the chest, sending him to the floor. She took the baby in her arms and rushed into the hallway.

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Outside, the family and cops heard the sound of a gunshot. The police were about to rush in.

“WAIT!” roared Mr. Incredible. The cops stopped and stared at the muscular Super. “Give her a chance. Don’t go in yet.”

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A lot was going through Invisigirl’s mind. She carried the baby through the apartment, as the man chased after her. She searched all around, trying to find some place to hide. Finally, she found an open room. Invisigirl ran inside and closed the door. After she finished locking it, she heard the sound of a gun about ready to fire. She took the baby, and formed a force field around herself. The man fired his shotgun. Bullets rushed out of the barrel. Some ricocheted off of Invisigirl’s force field. Most passed and shattered the glass window behind them. The bullets weren’t as strong as a powerful laser from Baron von Ruthless, nor as powerful as a punch from Mr. Incredible; however after seven shots of a shotgun, Invisigirl started to feel a little tired. To make matters worse, that was only one shotgun. The man had two left.

Police, Mr. Incredible, Elastigirl, and Speedster waited nervously outside. They could hear the loud blast of the shotgun coming from inside. All they could do was wait, hope, and pray that she made it out in one peace.

Suddenly, a Super flew in. He glided himself into the room where Invisigirl was protecting the infant. The teen Super Hero saw the person who flew in the room.

“SYNDROME!”

Syndrome lifted his arm slowly. Invisigirl found her force field levitating in the air. She gave an shocking look at Syndrome. In turn, he levitated the purple orb out of the apartment room and onto the safe ground. While all of this was happening, the man continued to fire his shotgun through an open hole that his bullet’s penetrated. He blasted his rifle at Syndrome’s chest. The bullets bounced off of his chest. Syndrome fired a orange beam at the mans shotgun, which later disintegrated into millions of tiny pieces. Syndrome then fired his zero-point-energy beam at the man.

Minutes later, the man was placed into the back of a police car. It drove away into the distance. Meanwhile, the each member of the Incredibles family took turns congratulating and comforting the teenage girl of the family.

“You did a fantastic job today honey.” said Elastigirl.

“Thanks mom. I hate to say it, but Syndrome really saved my life in there. It’s like he knew that I was in trouble. He just flew in without consulting the authorities.”

Just then, a police officer walked over to the family. “Incredibles, we have a couple of situations right now. In Downtown Metroville, somebody is planning to jump off a building. And someone is robbing a subway station nearby.”

“I got the subway guy.” spoke Speedster as he dashed as fast as he could toward the subway station.

Mr. Incredible hopped into the Incredibile. “Honey, I’ll take care of the suicidal man. Take the shortcut through the NSA HQ and get Violet home.”

Invisigirl smiled and said charmingly. “Thanks dad.”

The Incredibile sped off into the horizon. Elastigirl and Invisigirl walked to the pool area of the apartment. They entered the girl’s locker room. Elastigirl opened up a locker and reached inside. She pressed a couple buttons inside. Soon, a hole opened up in the middle of the locker room. Both jumped in and slid down a slide leading toward the NSA HQ.

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Meanwhile, Speedster finally arrived at Metroville Subway Station. He saw many panicked people. A nervous man with a gun was asking everyone that he came up to for money. Speedster looked around and saw two downed cops, both seriously wounded. Speedster stared at the armed robber.

The boy began to formulate his plan. “Okay, as soon as he is done taking money away from that woman, I am going to run in there, trip him up, and. . .”

Unfortunately, before Dash could put his plan into action, the robbers gun floated out of his hands and out a window. That was when Syndrome flew in. His hand was glowing black as a raven while the gun was levitated in midair. Soon, his hand stopped glowing and the gun fell right into a dumpster outside. Syndrome’s eyes started to grow pink. At the same time, the confused robber was put in a trance. He walked like he was a zombie out of the Metroville Subway Station and into a police car. As the patrol vehicle sped away, people roared with applause, acknowledging the Super.

“No need good citizens of Metroville.” responded Syndrome humbly. “I am just here to protect our city from the evil of crime.”

Syndrome winked at the crowd, and with subsonic speed, flew away into the sky.

Speedster witnessed all of this with awe. He went up to a woman. “Excuse me, can you help me out? What just happened?” he asked, trying to sort things out.

“Do I know you?” she asked. A minute later, “Oh you are Mr. Incredible’s son. Sorry, I forgot about you.”

“Never mind.” pouted the young Super as he angrily ran back to his house.

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Mr. Incredible talked to the police. “Thank goodness that he hasn’t jumped yet,” was all that everyone watching was happy about.

“Hey! Mr. Incredible!” called a voice.

It was Frozone. He skated over to his Super friend. Both formed their plan of action just in case the suicidal man decides to jump. Sadly, that just happened. The man leapt as far as he could to end it all. The two started to execute their plan. Mr. Incredible jumped as high as he could and drilled his elbow into the asphalt. The impacted created a huge crater in the street, about ten feet wide, and 15 feet deep. Frozone started to fill up the crater with layers of snow with his ice powers. Together, both made a soft landing pad.

Just as the man was fifty feet above ground, a large gust of wind started to blow in the air. It blew harder and harder. The harder the wind blew, the slower the man began to fall. Then, Syndrome came flying in, grabbed him in midair, and glided down to the ground. Paramedics rushed him over to the hospital while the people (once again) cheered for their new favorite hero.

Syndrome flashed a couple poses for the flashing cameras. Afterwards, his rocket boots activated, and he flew off into the distance. Mr. Incredible was so angry, he pounded on a car as hard as he could to release his rage. The impact completely demolished the automobile. People glared at Mr. Incredible.

“HEY, THAT IS MY CAR!” yelled someone in the very back.

Mr. Incredible grinned sheepishly. He then ran to the Incredibile, hopped in, and drove away into the sunset.

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Back at home, Violet was helping her mom cook dinner. Just then, Dash and Bob stomped into the room with glares on their faces. Dash and Bob went to the kitchen and sat down at the table. Even Jack-Jack’s coos couldn’t even put a smile on the distraught guys’ face. Helen and Vi looked at each other. The shining orange sun outside slowly began to sink behind the horizon as a bright full moon began to appear in the dark sky with millions of stars surrounding it.

(Kudos to anyone who understands the last sentence.)

Wow…a great Chapter.

I can really start to see how frusterating it must be for the Parrs…augh.

Review-9/10

Thanks for the review Al-Bob. I hoped you really enjoyed it.

Really great chapter, TSS. It seems as if The Incredibles’ job is being taken away from them. I’m looking forward to reading what happens next, and how they will handle Syndrome saving the day, rather than them. I also want to know exactly what Syndrome’s motive is with helping the citizens of Metroville.